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@Phil From script to screen - Updated

I have taken your feedback into account and updated the story! What if it begins with the astronaut (in current time) sitting on the ground and collecting said samples, then stops and takes out a pair of scissors he has as a necklace around his neck. He looks longingly at it, then we cut to a flashback of him cutting and styling a doll. His dad walks in and we can see the disappointment in his eyes. He jank the doll from the boys hands, and points from the boy to a poster of an astronaut, as if telling him that that is what he is supposed to become. Then he slams the door. The boy clutches his scissors and cry. Match-cut to the astronaut wiping a tear while holding the same scissors, then tucking it away and continuing his task. I think this could be done while not spending too much time, and would get the point across. I would like to avoid speech though, and believe hand gestures and facial expressions could be enough. What do you think? I worry that the queue would hinder us ...

Premise - OGR 1

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From script to screen - OGR 1

From script to screen - OGR 1 by Sandra Elise Sandal on Scribd

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Themes: Environment Coming of age? Discovery Courage Survival Synopsis: The earth became uninhabitable, and to survive, humans built mechanical, floating islands chained to the earth’s surface. Decades passed, and the truth was forgotten. Life moved on. By coincidence a young girl discovers a way in to the machinery of her island, and from there; the chain. She decides to climb down to find out what is down there.  This is a hard journey, but eventually she reaches down to earth. What will she discover?